Anon
This story is crazy. Just crazy. Like the writter is doing drugs too along with her characters.
I have NO idea what’s happening or how will it end(can madness end?) but it is so amusing to read.
There is so much going on in every chapter, so many characters and yet all of them are on equal grounds( even though we read more about Orel and Nikto’s sex then others)…we get to read about each one of them a bit.
I can’t even picture how they look( honestly too many scars, threads and freakish stuffs)… but I’d like to see the true conspiracy(if there is one) disciveered, the war with bey finished and see Lis hooking up with someone.
I think how Nikto came to be what he is should remain a secret till the end of this story( it does have an end…but madness has no end ahahaa)
Mashkai
Wow, very interesting story. I love Nik. Hope to see more soon.
AnihyrMoonstar
You’ve created a really interesting world here, with a fascinating cast of characters, while managing to steer clear of cliches. I really like Nikto; his personality really lures the reader in to wonder more about him, as does his past. It’s also nice that you introduce your facts about the world as you go along, rather than starting off listing all kinds of things to “build the scene” while losing the reader’s interest. Jumping right into the story keeps things moving while also making sure that people pay attention in order to understand what’s going on.
kylee
Thanks for the new chapters. I was just about to start searching for this story. It is one of my favorite stories on this site. I can never get enough of these crazy bastards.
kylee
Oh my God! What an insane pair. I had a good laugh when Orel and Nik appeared the morning after their big fight. Orel with ihis bad eye and Nik with his cane. Love the sex scene by the way. Orel is definitely spinning out of control. On one hand Asa got the beating that anyone of them would get if they defied Orel’s orders like that, and Orel got the beating he deserved for going out of control like that. That poor girl downstairs had no idea of what she was missing out on.
Roseykins
These guys are crazy but I love hanging out with them. Orel is torturing himself so much about his relationship with Nikto. I hope he doesn’t push Nikto away with his insecurities. Lis trying to steal Asa is just hilarious.
kylee
Poor Vil. I got the feeling that things would turn out badly for him He did not have it in him to pass Orel’s initiation. The story is refreshingly unpredictable. I think I am getting addicted to it.
I really love this story.
Roseykins
I finally caught up to chapter 19. I love the story so far. Orel feels the attraction but it doesn’t seem like Nikto will be reciprocating anytime soon.I think Orel must be really strong to not get jealous when Nikto is going off with other girls. My other suggestion is to try to put more of a hook at the beginning of chapter 1 to make it easier for readers to understand what is going on. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Roseykins
Tol’s recounting of his trip in Chapter 14 is absolutely hilarious. The whole story is awesome. I am wondering how come Nikto dared to take Enriki’s sister to bed. He must be nuts! LOL
I have been reading your story on and off and I just love it so far. It is so different and the guys in the gang are so well developed. I like the way you introduce the rules of the world. It makes me think of a videogame. I can wait to catch up to the last chapters. i hope the agreement will go well though there seems to be some tension between Nikto and Lis.
Scrobette
… To say I’m bemused by this story would be somewhat of an understatement… Don’t get me wrong, the characters are intriguing and the cultures/worlds fascinating but I have absolutely no idea where this story is heading. You say in the premise that Orel will experience many changes… I hope for the better because his character is twisted and obnoxious at best. Nikto is the real mystery, he’s so cool at the exterior but something else is brewing inside… I’m very interested to see where this fic goes… Please update soon.